Score: 10

"Funny!"

submission: Left 4 Dead Epic

date: September 15, 2009

I love the drawing style of this, works very well. The jokes were brilliant too! Great job!

Score: 7

"Interesting"

submission: Breaking the Bank

date: April 25, 2009

I like the idea and concept. The character animation has a unique style and simplicity.

If you want to improve this, here's a suggestion:

Lengthen the buildup to the result. Let's say you have the explosion idea... People will be anticipating the bomb to explode and if you reach from point A (where he gets the idea) to point B (the bomb being planted) too quickly, it reduces the thrill and fun of watching him get to that stage! So much goodness can be added in between to impact the result more.

Add obstacles, that is the one definite way of making it more interesting for the viewer. Audiences are interested in the story of how he goes about executing his plans, go front point A, to C to B... but never from point A to B directly.

Keep at it and hope to see more of your stuff!
-WX

Score: 7

"Errmm..."

submission: Halo: Funny Situations

date: April 10, 2005

I didn't realise you had me in the credits as inspiration! LOL. Thanks for that and congrats on a good flash, not really funny but still had effort. Try to make the movie flow rather than cut it in scenes, it would be alot better =) I don't think I even know you but anyways thanks for adding me in the credits (you spelt my name "Wei Xing" wrong!)

-WX