Age/Gender: 20, Male
Location: England
Job: Character Animator
I am an aspiring character animator and I love feedback so send me an email!
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Flash Reviews: 30
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30 Reviews | 2 w/ Responses
I love the drawing style of this, works very well. The jokes were brilliant too! Great job!
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I like the idea and concept. The character animation has a unique style and simplicity.
If you want to improve this, here's a suggestion:
Lengthen the buildup to the result. Let's say you have the explosion idea... People will be anticipating the bomb to explode and if you reach from point A (where he gets the idea) to point B (the bomb being planted) too quickly, it reduces the thrill and fun of watching him get to that stage! So much goodness can be added in between to impact the result more.
Add obstacles, that is the one definite way of making it more interesting for the viewer. Audiences are interested in the story of how he goes about executing his plans, go front point A, to C to B... but never from point A to B directly.
Keep at it and hope to see more of your stuff!
-WX
Author's Response:
Whoa! It's an honor to be reviewed by you!
This tip is really helpful! I'm definitely keeping it in mind for everything I make from now on.
Thanks again!
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I didn't realise you had me in the credits as inspiration! LOL. Thanks for that and congrats on a good flash, not really funny but still had effort. Try to make the movie flow rather than cut it in scenes, it would be alot better =) I don't think I even know you but anyways thanks for adding me in the credits (you spelt my name "Wei Xing" wrong!)
-WX
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Great job Klacid. A major improvement indeed. =) I don't always give 9/10's. This means near perfection! lol.
-WX
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Great job once again! The part where George Bush starts talking and singing about September 11 is absolutely hilarious! More! More!
-WX
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Great movie, Samus. Don't you think my name is abit too small in the credits? LOL. Your frame by frame animation looks very tweened. That's all from me. Hehe, XD
-WX
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A great game with tons of dialogue! I didnt spot a bug at all! And you made this by yourself too! This better get frontpage and some awards! :D
Good Luck!
-WX
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That was really awesome! I was very impressed with the backgrounds, water effects and the tree swinging smoothness!!! :D Very well done :) Tho i have to say that if u animated ur characters at a frame by frame, it would give u the perfect smoothness! I saw that some of it was done a few frames at a time and weren't as smooth as it could be, but still very impressive. With ur talents, you could easily animate a TV show with some successful results. I hope you find my review helpful and I would like to see another!
-WX
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sorry...this one isnt as good as ur other ones too! Keep up the good work and i hope u make George Bush say more crazy things next time^^
-WX
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This isnt as good as your other ones but its still good^^ i wanna see more funny reactions!
-WX
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