Age/Gender: 20, Male
Location: England
Job: Character Animator
I am an aspiring character animator and I love feedback so send me an email!
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I like the idea and concept. The character animation has a unique style and simplicity.
If you want to improve this, here's a suggestion:
Lengthen the buildup to the result. Let's say you have the explosion idea... People will be anticipating the bomb to explode and if you reach from point A (where he gets the idea) to point B (the bomb being planted) too quickly, it reduces the thrill and fun of watching him get to that stage! So much goodness can be added in between to impact the result more.
Add obstacles, that is the one definite way of making it more interesting for the viewer. Audiences are interested in the story of how he goes about executing his plans, go front point A, to C to B... but never from point A to B directly.
Keep at it and hope to see more of your stuff!
-WX
Author's Response:
Whoa! It's an honor to be reviewed by you!
This tip is really helpful! I'm definitely keeping it in mind for everything I make from now on.
Thanks again!
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A very good story, i must admit and the best part is that it was very touching :).
Author's Response:
Thanks WX! I'm glad you found the meaning of Christmas and found it a very touching tale! Have you read "A Christmas Carol" by Charles Dickens? It is based on that book. Happy Holidays to you!
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